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SeptTwentySevenOhSeven by ~stormwolf13:iconstormwolf13:



9*27*2007

Beautiful flames
They twist and dance
You said, Trust me
And I took a chance
Walked into the fire
Without a care
But then you let go-
Left me there
And so I burn
With eternal pain
No tears to
Ease my pain

Glorious waves
They ebb and flow
You said Love me
And yes its so
I gave my heart
You offered your hand
But then you let go-
returned to the sand
and so I drown
In crushing tide
No breath, for
Has love died?
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:iconshescreamsmurder:
i love it!
simply amazing

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Faut souffrir pour être belle
:iconanderon:
Quite striking. This poem tells of heartbreak very well indeed.

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A sincere smile is worth more than gold, and a true friend is worth more than the most precious of gems.

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Thanks for the comments...

I suppose it is true, an author writes best what they know...

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~Where am I going...and why am I in this handbasket???~

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